First Cut Feedback

When we had completed our first cut and finalised our editing, we showed it to some members of our target audiences. We got some good feedback including the fact that the storyline throughout the video was well maintained and we had some creative shots however there was more bad that seemed to outweigh the good in that a lot of shots weren’t thought of as any good and we had some technical glitches on the tape in which we had used which meant that occasionally across our shots there would be a flicker. After this, we knew we would have to set a date to re shoot the unsatisfactory scenes such as the SIM card shot and the burning shot.

Feedback on presentation of first cut by Mrs Allison

Amy, Perry and Marianna
First cut feedback

• Use of static at the start is a creative solution to your tape problem
• Love the whip pan – technique works well here – still don’t like Amy’s knee in shot
• Band location and lighting is effective
• Burning the photo sequence doesn’t work well – no drama. Consider a burning of effects on an outdoor barbecue
• The shot of the 2 girl singers in the garage goes on too long
• Lovely reaction shot from Becci when she drops the sim card
• Revenge would seem stronger if the sim card flushed down toilet!

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